Like skyscrapers
She comes in stories,
no wonder her building
Is, a combination of elegance and style.
Like a forest she is made up of trees
Eyes wide open in threes
Two eyes left-right in awestruck gaze
A mouth as a third eye in haze..
Like a mirror
She, reflected dreams
Stories of what he wanted to be
And who he wanted her to be to he.
Like, an ocean
She was limitless
She, was something he couldn’t exhaust
Something blue and soft
Something salty to add taste to his life
And quench his thirst.
Like fan, she knew
When to cool his hot temper
And like a fireplace,
She knew when to be his warmth.
Written by : Michael Afenfia
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This poem is amazing. The imagery is epic!!!
Beautiful😍😍😍 amazing .no other words tl describe this poem…
like honey, this is naturally delicious
Heart blowing and mind refreshing
Beautiful piece. Way to go
Lovely
This is absolutely beautiful.
Although it seems more like the love between two, my mum came to mind reading this.
More knowledge AB.
Thrilling poem. Wordplay, rhythm and rhymes is amazing. I vote for this poem.
I love the flows, th rhymes and the rhythm . I vote for this poem
Avid imageries and remarkable narrative skills.
I love this… Especially the part about stories…being an architecture student it made sooo much sense
like messi, our wordsmith play with wordswe want you to b our next chinua Achebe and our next sole soyinka. this poem get all our votes.
dope poem
Whoa! This is splendid. Nice 1
Beautiful! Dreams. I love this.
Simply amazing… It awakens our imaginations.
Beautiful piece! I love it🙌
Captivating use of metaphors!
Totally amazing piece. The last paragraph really got my heart. Way to go ab
You sure have a remarkable way with words. Beautiful piece
I’d define this piece as a capture of reality in a very relatable form that just tickles our fancy! This is what a literary piece should portray!
Amazing
Superb wording. Beautiful imagery. Makes me wanna fall in love again!!!
So Dope kip it up
Has an amazing flow
Nice piece
Cool
Awesome poem
Nyc piece as always 👍👍👍🏻
Captivating! Absolutely amazing!
Thrilling poem. Wordplay, rhythm and rhymes is amazing. I vote for this poem.
Nyccc
Wonderful write-up.
Called word smith for write-ups like this… Awesome Abdulbaseet
This Poem is really really good man. This is a serious talent here. good job🤜🏽🤛🏽
The composition of this poem is top notch. AB knows his way with words.
This is simply beautiful. I love it
Heart blowing and mind refreshing
Nice one.
This is so fantastic. I love this poem.
Nice piece. Apt
I love this poem…Abdul nice
nice
Masterpiece!
Wonderful piece…..i’d like to see more of it. Kudos to you.
Very nice piece! Did not want it to end. Good job!
Beautiful artwork of words. The poem is mind blowing. The rhythmic sounds at the end of each line is very appealing..
I love this
Nice job Abdul… The greatest
Nice poem! Well done
Great piece… Really creative. Keep it up
Awesome
This is good, makes sense.
nyc piece
nyc piece basit
This is beautifully written…Really nice Abdulbasit
Awesome piece… I love!
Superb!
This is beautiful.
What a Beautiful and brilliant piece!! My wordsmith! ! Write on!
My bro is truly a wordsmith! Big ups bro!
Wow! Spectacular your words are imaginative ND beautiful
Dope one man……
Wow beautiful really nice poem Abdulbaseet
really nice piece
beautiful piece!! 💯
nice one
Fanta! stick!!
This is magical😻🔥😻
Nyc piece.. Go AB 😘
Woah! This is really impressive.
I’m in love with this poem. Totally
Worthsmith all the way
Nice one. Way to go
Sweetening sensation.
❤️Wordsmith
Spectacular as always Abdulbasit. Always a pleasure reading your poems. Thank you!
beautiful thumbs up for u.👍
It’s sooooo nice, deep too. Keep writing Abdul.
Dope story, deep. Keep writing Abdhul
EXCEPTIONAL. Ab wordsmith Always🙌🏻👌🏻
Beautiful piece
Great piece!
This is AWESOME, I’m in love 😍 😋😋
Well written
Good choice of words
I love this
Beautiful!
I love every line.
I’m proud of you.
I’m in love with this poem.
Thank you for this poem. Reminds me of a lot.
Exclusively written.
This is a lovely poem. I like!
And as always, u surely awaken dat spirit of love in me… dat was dope n superb dear.