I have inked my tears, I have weeped sad words

I have shred sheets of my heart and my being

I have crossed trueness for refined sweetness in words

I have penned odes and lores dumped in bins

In the hood of my child days, I felt a rush

In my first tenths I dreamed sweet torrents

In my youth, lived the dream and felt the pang

In my dying days, the times I’d revel

Here’s my heart with crimson tears dripping

Here’s the proof, the feel, the sight and rhythm

Àbèfé;

When the world is on fire, we’d sail to the moon

And wander hand in hand; the solstices

And from the heavens, we’d pee rains on man

And on the walls of paradise, we’d scribble our names

When the pool dense in the cloud chills,

we’d tan at the foot of the sun unclad

And play hide and seek with the Angels

And build ice castles in heaven’s courtyard

And our glee will echo the halls of God’s manor

And snuggle under His regal floating robe

I have fore-played dreams and fantasies

Fore the days I found the keys to my heart

For forever is a dream I dream fortnightly

And fortune is not complete without (yo)u

Four days, weeks, four months, years; till I’m forty

Or forged in bones in the comfort of my tomb

For a fish drowns still without the sea

For you are my world, my dream and my sea

 

 

*ÀBÈFÉ – A Yoruba name for someone dear

 

 

Written by : Michael Afenfia

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522 Comments

  1. Ebunoluwa February 2, 2018 at 8:00 am - Reply

    Wow! This is great read. The word play is so on point, the imagery made me view how it’ll be peeing on humans from heaven 😂 Now all I wanna achieve is go to heaven with my “Abefe” right away.

    Well done Oladele Taiwo

    • odunayo February 7, 2018 at 1:29 pm - Reply

      Lovely piece

  2. tiwadolah_pens February 2, 2018 at 8:25 am - Reply

    best of its kind

  3. nishay perry February 2, 2018 at 9:19 am - Reply

    Awesome
    Oladele Taiwo Oluwaseyi

  4. Tex February 2, 2018 at 9:34 am - Reply

    I could see love in every eye blink of the piece. #Abefe.. Indeed, when you pleade for love you get love in return.. Nice Piece

  5. Osinuga Emmanuel February 2, 2018 at 11:18 am - Reply

    Wonderful

  6. Philip Peace February 2, 2018 at 1:04 pm - Reply

    And this is the piece that keeps you glued to the end. You get into the reason and enjoy the flow of the content in relating with the context. Kudos, sir.

  7. Tolulope Odekunle February 2, 2018 at 3:31 pm - Reply

    I love this,,,,,, I was lost in imagination at a point…… peeing on humans from heaven with the love of my life would be perfect 😁💕💕💕
    Thumbs up bro

  8. ayanwoye ifeoluwa eniola February 2, 2018 at 3:47 pm - Reply

    Nice one…more grace.

  9. Tersemann February 2, 2018 at 4:25 pm - Reply

    Kudos man. I cannot but say kudos again. You killed the theme, to my knowledge, by making the diction sweet and swift like honey. I know, I truly Àbèfé exists, she’ll be down to your toes in your (even) absence.

    Kowtow, brother.

  10. Lawal February 2, 2018 at 9:03 pm - Reply

    Dope writeup! Superb!

  11. Yinkainspires February 2, 2018 at 11:29 pm - Reply

    My Oga at the top…. Its a nice one sir… Good read… Thumbs up

  12. Abioye February 3, 2018 at 1:56 am - Reply

    More power to your elbow brother Oladele Taiwo Oluwaseyi. Great!

  13. Timothy Morenikeji February 3, 2018 at 6:10 am - Reply

    Ink of your pen will never run dry. More blessing Oladele Taiwo

  14. Lahan abimbola February 3, 2018 at 9:02 am - Reply

    Wow, what a nice piece. Weldone bro.

  15. Seun February 3, 2018 at 10:12 am - Reply

    Dope stuff
    👏👏👏

  16. qasoomah February 3, 2018 at 11:43 am - Reply

    This is the point I try to make everytime. When you are African, your poetry of admiration can should not be watery. Love lingers on the tongue with every line. Wonderful.

    • Olaoniye Folasade February 3, 2018 at 7:36 pm - Reply

      Abefe…world, dream and sea. Well done, nice work.

  17. Abefe February 3, 2018 at 5:37 pm - Reply

    👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 nice

  18. Oluwadamilola February 3, 2018 at 6:13 pm - Reply

    Oladele Taiwo, more ink to your pen. Soar high!

  19. Olympia February 3, 2018 at 6:31 pm - Reply

    wow! wish someone’s son could dedicate something so beautiful as this to me. well-done

  20. kean February 3, 2018 at 6:32 pm - Reply

    nice

  21. Tate February 3, 2018 at 6:37 pm - Reply

    This would be added to my collection. A very lovely piece to be kept for my Abefe

    Good work, sire

  22. Olalere February 3, 2018 at 6:39 pm - Reply

    this is cool

  23. Adesola February 3, 2018 at 6:44 pm - Reply

    Totally awesome

  24. Akanbi, Shedrack Opeyemi February 3, 2018 at 6:55 pm - Reply

    This kind of piece is rare! Absolute beauty!

  25. Awoleye ifeoluwa February 3, 2018 at 6:56 pm - Reply

    Superb

  26. Olaoluwa February 3, 2018 at 6:57 pm - Reply

    Greatly penned 👏👏@oladele taiwo

  27. Esv_Keks February 3, 2018 at 8:24 pm - Reply

    Beautifully penned. Kudos.

  28. olamide February 3, 2018 at 8:32 pm - Reply

    This is simply awesome.

  29. Ibrahim February 3, 2018 at 8:55 pm - Reply

    Another masterpiece from the logophile. Kudos sir

  30. Ololade February 3, 2018 at 9:01 pm - Reply

    Intriguing piece. Captivating

  31. Elizabeth Frank February 3, 2018 at 9:10 pm - Reply

    Wow. Exquisitely penned.

    Keep the ink flowing dear.

  32. prince Joe February 3, 2018 at 9:52 pm - Reply

    wow!

    I laud this great Yorubatic piece in Many ways of honor.

    beautiful one as that.

    Bless up!

  33. Justice February 3, 2018 at 9:55 pm - Reply

    Aesthetics!
    The title itself indicate that the writer is rooted in culture and really understand the usage of of Yoruba names which are with source and meanings.
    ÀBÈFÉ, someone unique,one who is dear to your heart…

    Good job!

  34. Priscilla chisco February 3, 2018 at 9:57 pm - Reply

    Beautiful

  35. Robert February 3, 2018 at 10:03 pm - Reply

    Abefe 🔥. This is beautiful. Ink on Bard of all Bards.

  36. Adekoya Samson Adedeji February 3, 2018 at 10:15 pm - Reply

    Nice one

  37. mzaca February 3, 2018 at 10:21 pm - Reply

    Lovely piece…

  38. Mohammed Shamsudeen February 3, 2018 at 10:37 pm - Reply

    Great! Oladele Taiwo, have mine.

  39. AJIBADE ABDULLAH PENTALK February 3, 2018 at 10:43 pm - Reply

    this is intellectually penned.
    well-done big bro.

  40. DAMISOLA OMOLE February 3, 2018 at 11:10 pm - Reply

    Lovely poem ♥♥

  41. Oni Tomiwa February 4, 2018 at 6:46 am - Reply

    Wonderful.

  42. Oluwatomisin Pauline kotila February 4, 2018 at 12:48 pm - Reply

    I love this poem, you have done a great job.

  43. Adeoye Olajide February 4, 2018 at 2:07 pm - Reply

    Superb!

  44. smallie February 4, 2018 at 3:23 pm - Reply

    well penned sir

  45. Adaora February 4, 2018 at 3:43 pm - Reply

    Now! That was beautifully penned. Whoa!

  46. Comfort February 4, 2018 at 4:11 pm - Reply

    This is superb

  47. Okeniyi Oluwatobiloba February 4, 2018 at 8:08 pm - Reply

    This is a work of art that portrays the value of Abefe.

  48. Steven Mackay February 4, 2018 at 8:15 pm - Reply

    Great work

  49. Odunola February 4, 2018 at 8:20 pm - Reply

    Nice piece sir.. Keep it up 👍

  50. boluwatife February 4, 2018 at 8:55 pm - Reply

    kudos bro, nice write up…Abefe Mi..
    bigger u I pray

  51. Gbenga February 4, 2018 at 9:15 pm - Reply

    nice lyrics

  52. Phylix February 4, 2018 at 9:47 pm - Reply

    This is beautiful stuff.

  53. Leo McAnthony February 4, 2018 at 9:48 pm - Reply

    Wow… A great piece!

  54. Mhiz haryorbhamee ibk February 4, 2018 at 10:06 pm - Reply

    great work..nice one

  55. Rukayya February 4, 2018 at 10:14 pm - Reply

    A wonderful piece. Makes love attractive even to the indifferent. More ink to your pen brother.

  56. Bukunmi February 5, 2018 at 7:09 am - Reply

    What a nice piece… It’s exotic.

  57. Olajumoke February 5, 2018 at 8:03 pm - Reply

    Wow! Nice piece. @Oladele Taiwo

  58. Adams Kayode February 5, 2018 at 8:09 pm - Reply

    9ice write up & it seriously cool someones head. keep it up bobo

  59. Bi bi ta yo February 5, 2018 at 9:20 pm - Reply

    Nice 1

  60. adeyemi February 5, 2018 at 10:38 pm - Reply

    kudos bro

  61. Ola February 5, 2018 at 10:59 pm - Reply

    This is beautiful. The figurative expressions are deep and relatable

  62. Aduagba February 6, 2018 at 3:59 pm - Reply

    so lovely

  63. Aramide February 6, 2018 at 9:58 pm - Reply

    I love this bro keep it up

  64. Adewale February 6, 2018 at 10:59 pm - Reply

    This is a lovely piece sire Katoonspeaks..
    the way you weaved the words was lovely too.. Continue inking wonderfully boss
    And dare not rain pee on us from heaven as we’d believe it’s a heavenly rain..

  65. Favor February 6, 2018 at 11:42 pm - Reply

    Its beautiful

  66. Jay February 7, 2018 at 11:57 am - Reply

    Nice work

  67. Duniya February 7, 2018 at 5:48 pm - Reply

    Wow…. Captivating

  68. Keevis February 7, 2018 at 5:51 pm - Reply

    I love the lines…. On point

  69. Mac Henry(Mr Spoken) February 7, 2018 at 5:56 pm - Reply

    Abefe

  70. Adebayor February 7, 2018 at 6:08 pm - Reply

    Wow!!! This is beautiful

  71. Alo Adefisayo February 7, 2018 at 6:49 pm - Reply

    wow.. Awesome
    u nailed it…. more of this by his Grace.
    Good one from you Oladele Taiwo

  72. Olubode abdus sobur February 7, 2018 at 7:03 pm - Reply

    Kudos to you bro,keep the flag flying high

  73. dipo February 7, 2018 at 7:09 pm - Reply

    nice write up…keep it up!!

  74. Abdullah February 7, 2018 at 7:16 pm - Reply

    Great

  75. Badmus February 7, 2018 at 7:25 pm - Reply

    Nice one, its lovely.

  76. Xty February 7, 2018 at 7:31 pm - Reply

    Nice piece

  77. Xty February 7, 2018 at 7:32 pm - Reply

    great

  78. Musa Esther February 7, 2018 at 7:44 pm - Reply

    This is Lovely. Nice piece bro@Oladele Taiwo

  79. Fola February 7, 2018 at 7:44 pm - Reply

    Perfectly written. Thumbs up

  80. Sean February 7, 2018 at 7:50 pm - Reply

    Love is indeed great

  81. Sirhethat February 7, 2018 at 7:50 pm - Reply

    Lovely piece, well-done

  82. D-CENT February 7, 2018 at 8:21 pm - Reply

    This piece is a masterpiece with a personal conviction that you’ve taken poetry to a climax of glory.
    I love the theme and diction.
    Bravo, Boss.

  83. D-CENT February 7, 2018 at 8:25 pm - Reply

    This piece is a masterpiece with a personal conviction that you’ve taken poetry to a climax of glory.
    I love the theme and diction.
    Bravo, Boss.

  84. vikky February 7, 2018 at 9:10 pm - Reply

    Nice one

  85. Dammy February 7, 2018 at 9:12 pm - Reply

    lovely piece. Really good one

  86. simple February 7, 2018 at 9:36 pm - Reply

    WOW
    This peoem is impressive and motivate me to become a poet.
    Nice work done bro, keep it up.

  87. Oluwanishola February 7, 2018 at 9:43 pm - Reply

    Nice one
    Keep it up

  88. Daniel Idam-Ndukwe February 7, 2018 at 9:47 pm - Reply

    Lovely piece !
    When the world is on fire, we’d sail to the moon and wander hand in hand; the solstice 💕💕

  89. Folayemi February 7, 2018 at 10:11 pm - Reply

    Nice piece

  90. Seyi February 7, 2018 at 10:21 pm - Reply

    Smooth, brilliant. Masterpiece

  91. Hapalet February 7, 2018 at 11:05 pm - Reply

    Its a nice piece … Expecting more

  92. Olamide ifeoluwa February 7, 2018 at 11:08 pm - Reply

    Great work…. of cause we can’t wait for 📝 more

  93. Vasily Mikhailovich Doestovski February 7, 2018 at 11:34 pm - Reply

    From the title to the poem
    You did a great job

  94. Francisca February 8, 2018 at 7:10 am - Reply

    Great work brother taiwo it really nice poem from the heart keep it 👆

  95. Bashiru Folahan February 8, 2018 at 8:32 am - Reply

    It’s a wonderful poem, nice one brother, love it

  96. olamide February 8, 2018 at 9:05 am - Reply

    Good job bro

  97. fadekemi February 8, 2018 at 9:10 am - Reply

    nice peom

  98. oyeniyi February 8, 2018 at 9:36 am - Reply

    good one

  99. Aliu Ridwan Babatunde February 8, 2018 at 12:11 pm - Reply

    Waoh! This is wonderful! @oladele taiwo oluwaseyi

  100. Clinton February 8, 2018 at 12:25 pm - Reply

    Wow! Beautiful!

  101. Joshua February 8, 2018 at 12:58 pm - Reply

    Sweet, captivating lines

  102. Knob February 8, 2018 at 1:00 pm - Reply

    Couldn’t expect less from a boss…good one Katoonspeaks

  103. Prof February 8, 2018 at 1:03 pm - Reply

    A jaw dropping piece, more nutrients to your brain

  104. Tunrayo February 8, 2018 at 1:04 pm - Reply

    Good one my baby. I am proud of you

  105. Yusmart February 8, 2018 at 1:04 pm - Reply

    Boss boss…nice poem

  106. Hife February 8, 2018 at 1:14 pm - Reply

    I genuflect o

  107. His grace February 8, 2018 at 1:16 pm - Reply

    Nice one Mr Tee

  108. Olaoluwapo February 8, 2018 at 1:17 pm - Reply

    My sweetie came through

  109. Aretha beauty February 8, 2018 at 1:19 pm - Reply

    Ride on Cousin

  110. Mimmy February 8, 2018 at 1:20 pm - Reply

    Cool

  111. Yisola February 8, 2018 at 1:22 pm - Reply

    Well done. The Lord is your strength

  112. Tolu February 8, 2018 at 1:25 pm - Reply

    More grease to your elbow

  113. Ebeh February 8, 2018 at 1:26 pm - Reply

    My guy!!!

  114. Kaze February 8, 2018 at 1:29 pm - Reply

    Dope brother

  115. Alabi Akinloluwa J February 8, 2018 at 1:29 pm - Reply

    What a wonderful write up.. One of its kind !! Love it

  116. Guitarboy February 8, 2018 at 1:30 pm - Reply

    ÀBÈFÉ- this is lyrical, deep and romantic. Win bro

  117. Seun February 8, 2018 at 1:32 pm - Reply

    Sweet words this valentine

  118. Munir February 8, 2018 at 1:44 pm - Reply

    You are good at what you do.

  119. Olamide Adepemeji February 8, 2018 at 1:55 pm - Reply

    Lover like no other…I love this.

  120. Ikeoluwa February 8, 2018 at 1:57 pm - Reply

    You write bro. Don’t stop

  121. Promise February 8, 2018 at 2:28 pm - Reply

    Nice one son, Daddy believes in you…lol

  122. HighDee February 8, 2018 at 2:57 pm - Reply

    Poetry at its peak

  123. Ruth Koledoye February 8, 2018 at 2:57 pm - Reply

    Nice write up

  124. Ojo Taofeeq Olalekan February 8, 2018 at 3:57 pm - Reply

    Wow..dis interesting bro..God is your strength

  125. Harry February 8, 2018 at 4:06 pm - Reply

    Bless you bro

  126. Khaleed February 8, 2018 at 4:09 pm - Reply

    Nice

  127. Okedusi Kehinde February 8, 2018 at 4:15 pm - Reply

    Cool

  128. Cecilia February 8, 2018 at 4:20 pm - Reply

    I love this

  129. Olaniyi Penmind February 8, 2018 at 4:21 pm - Reply

    Poetic, sleek use of words

  130. Temitope February 8, 2018 at 4:23 pm - Reply

    Well done bro

  131. Ebun February 8, 2018 at 4:25 pm - Reply

    Good flow

  132. Josiah February 8, 2018 at 4:28 pm - Reply

    God is your strength

  133. cynthia February 8, 2018 at 4:28 pm - Reply

    good one at that bro

  134. Amoke February 8, 2018 at 4:31 pm - Reply

    My school son

  135. Akanni Mariam February 8, 2018 at 4:35 pm - Reply

    Oga poet. Nice one

  136. Dipo the good February 8, 2018 at 4:36 pm - Reply

    Wow super

  137. Mz dheddie February 8, 2018 at 4:37 pm - Reply

    I believe in you bro. Soar on eagles wings

  138. Mr kehinde February 8, 2018 at 4:40 pm - Reply

    I love your pen bro. It is an envy to us all

  139. Deji Marcus February 8, 2018 at 5:10 pm - Reply

    Go boss

  140. Toluwalope February 8, 2018 at 5:13 pm - Reply

    Nice one bro

  141. Ayodeji Popoola February 8, 2018 at 5:15 pm - Reply

    This is the best love piece I have ever read. Great one poet.kudos

  142. Demilade February 8, 2018 at 6:06 pm - Reply

    Hey buddy, keep the flag flying. Nice, wonderful & lovely write up. God grant you wisdom to superceed your peers. One love bro

  143. Darminh dave February 8, 2018 at 6:16 pm - Reply

    Wowwww… This is lovely bro, thumbs up

  144. Gold February 8, 2018 at 6:36 pm - Reply

    Uncle, keep it up. God bless your hand work.

  145. Collins February 8, 2018 at 6:39 pm - Reply

    Welcome uncle Tee… God bless you

  146. Ola Olu February 8, 2018 at 7:05 pm - Reply

    Great stuff, Taiwo! Keep it up.

  147. John-Mary February 8, 2018 at 11:24 pm - Reply

    wonderful piece

  148. issa February 9, 2018 at 12:23 am - Reply

    nice write up

  149. SamIAm February 9, 2018 at 10:07 am - Reply

    Nice work!

  150. oluwadamilola February 9, 2018 at 11:05 am - Reply

    Nice one sir

  151. Osunlola Ayotomide February 9, 2018 at 12:31 pm - Reply

    This is awesome

  152. Opeyemi Oguns February 9, 2018 at 1:48 pm - Reply

    Marvelous, splendid.

  153. Sunny Adebs February 9, 2018 at 1:49 pm - Reply

    Nice piece. I admire your work

  154. Prince Oye February 9, 2018 at 1:50 pm - Reply

    Dynamic, a captivating piece

  155. Damilare February 9, 2018 at 4:17 pm - Reply

    Nicely penned… Keep up bro.

  156. Oluwatofunmi February 9, 2018 at 4:42 pm - Reply

    Fantastic!

  157. Temitope February 10, 2018 at 3:29 am - Reply

    Lovely piece. Keep it up.

  158. Lilian February 10, 2018 at 7:04 am - Reply

    Abefe… The words of the poem took me to another realm entirely. One where it’s just me and my love against the world. Well done!

  159. Temitope Ogunjuyigbe Adegbenjo February 10, 2018 at 8:42 am - Reply

    Heyyyy! This is brilliant! I hope you win this competition 💪💪💪

  160. Oluwatosin February 10, 2018 at 10:06 am - Reply

    Abefe? Hmmmm

  161. Deborah O February 10, 2018 at 11:32 am - Reply

    Abefe God bless you

  162. Mrs Oladele February 10, 2018 at 11:46 am - Reply

    beautiful

  163. Funke February 10, 2018 at 11:47 am - Reply

    n👿💨 😲😱😂
    👗👉 👕👕👕
    👠🚧 🚧🚧🚧
    Back to school!

  164. Missy ola February 10, 2018 at 12:01 pm - Reply

    You are destined for greatness

  165. Missy ola February 10, 2018 at 12:02 pm - Reply

    This is a beatiful love piece….valentine special, i wizh i was your abefe

  166. Snow white February 10, 2018 at 12:05 pm - Reply

    This is hot

  167. Mr Raph February 10, 2018 at 12:19 pm - Reply

    Kudos bro

  168. Jossy February 10, 2018 at 12:21 pm - Reply

    Good one

  169. Landlord February 10, 2018 at 5:25 pm - Reply

    Superb @ Oladele Taiwo Oluwaseyi

  170. Beenie February 10, 2018 at 5:25 pm - Reply

    Splendid

  171. Folawiyi February 10, 2018 at 5:30 pm - Reply

    Great write up.
    I am in love

  172. Adedeji February 10, 2018 at 5:31 pm - Reply

    Poem so dope

  173. Gimbiya Galadima February 10, 2018 at 5:49 pm - Reply

    Wow. This brought tears to my eyes. Lovely piece with an emotional touch.

  174. Mide February 10, 2018 at 7:33 pm - Reply

    I always admire your pen bro

  175. Master Ayo February 10, 2018 at 7:38 pm - Reply

    Wonderful write up, colourful too

  176. Popoola February 10, 2018 at 7:38 pm - Reply

    This is tasteful bro…well done

  177. Adebisi February 10, 2018 at 7:39 pm - Reply

    The is topnotch. Respect sir

  178. Mark February 10, 2018 at 7:40 pm - Reply

    I genuflect o. You be boss

  179. Lahan Dammy February 10, 2018 at 7:43 pm - Reply

    My boy, I doff my heart always

  180. Ade Adeluyi February 10, 2018 at 7:44 pm - Reply

    You did well on this

  181. Tobbi Absa February 10, 2018 at 7:46 pm - Reply

    Cool

  182. Moyosore February 10, 2018 at 7:47 pm - Reply

    This is wawu

  183. Adetutu February 10, 2018 at 7:48 pm - Reply

    Am falling in love right now

  184. Dayo Afolabi February 10, 2018 at 7:50 pm - Reply

    Respect

  185. nolly J February 10, 2018 at 7:50 pm - Reply

    kudos

  186. Chinasi February 10, 2018 at 7:52 pm - Reply

    This is sweet

  187. Olatungee February 10, 2018 at 7:53 pm - Reply

    This is art

  188. Decent Gist February 10, 2018 at 7:53 pm - Reply

    more grace

  189. tee jay February 10, 2018 at 7:54 pm - Reply

    Romantic

  190. Akpan February 10, 2018 at 7:54 pm - Reply

    Good piece

  191. Slim angel February 10, 2018 at 7:55 pm - Reply

    Funny, pee from heaven

  192. Mikky February 10, 2018 at 7:55 pm - Reply

    You blew my mind with your words poet

  193. Dam Laji February 10, 2018 at 7:57 pm - Reply

    Sweeeeeet

  194. Decent February 10, 2018 at 7:58 pm - Reply

    Nyc 1 bro

  195. Morounfolu February 10, 2018 at 7:58 pm - Reply

    Apt use of words. Deep poesy

  196. Amoke Wunmee February 10, 2018 at 7:59 pm - Reply

    Why didn’t you use my name Amoke…use it next time o…nice one

  197. Grail pusher February 10, 2018 at 8:00 pm - Reply

    Bloody good

  198. Clement February 10, 2018 at 8:01 pm - Reply

    Justice done with this brilliant piece. Allow me to copy it please

  199. Oga Bello February 10, 2018 at 8:02 pm - Reply

    This poem sweet pass sugarcane o

  200. Nelly February 10, 2018 at 8:04 pm - Reply

    This looks like lyrics

  201. Akinz February 10, 2018 at 8:04 pm - Reply

    Correct one

  202. David February 10, 2018 at 8:04 pm - Reply

    Great piece

  203. Romoke February 10, 2018 at 8:05 pm - Reply

    You blew me away… Brilliant

  204. Toluene February 10, 2018 at 8:05 pm - Reply

    I enjoyed reading this

  205. Sam February 10, 2018 at 8:06 pm - Reply

    Well penned

  206. Sunday February 10, 2018 at 8:07 pm - Reply

    This is total bliss

  207. Zuluolayinka February 10, 2018 at 8:07 pm - Reply

    Wow so nice .
    More wisdom bro

  208. Abiola Poppy wealth February 10, 2018 at 8:08 pm - Reply

    You are a wealth of wit

  209. Bassey February 10, 2018 at 8:10 pm - Reply

    Interesting

  210. Faith Adigun February 10, 2018 at 8:10 pm - Reply

    Great stuff. Own it man

  211. Jennifer February 10, 2018 at 8:12 pm - Reply

    Can I be ur abefe? This is awe-mazing

  212. Abbey February 10, 2018 at 8:12 pm - Reply

    Nice poem

  213. Lasisi Sewa February 10, 2018 at 8:13 pm - Reply

    Bro Katoonspeaks

  214. Lasisi Towobolar February 10, 2018 at 8:14 pm - Reply

    My uncle

  215. Seyi February 10, 2018 at 8:14 pm - Reply

    This is good

  216. Seyi Chris February 10, 2018 at 8:15 pm - Reply

    Namesake, I trust you

  217. Ishola February 10, 2018 at 8:16 pm - Reply

    Good stuff

  218. Mz Independence February 10, 2018 at 8:16 pm - Reply

    Please write a book

  219. Michele February 10, 2018 at 8:16 pm - Reply

    Exquisite

  220. Chic February 10, 2018 at 8:17 pm - Reply

    Dazzled

  221. Francisca February 10, 2018 at 8:18 pm - Reply

    On point

  222. Angel Toyobaby February 10, 2018 at 8:18 pm - Reply

    Cute visuals …I could see angels playing along

  223. Martin February 10, 2018 at 8:19 pm - Reply

    I vote this poem

  224. Precious February 10, 2018 at 8:19 pm - Reply

    Well written

  225. Kike February 10, 2018 at 8:20 pm - Reply

    This deserves a Laurel

  226. Eunice February 10, 2018 at 8:20 pm - Reply

    Beautifully penned

  227. Anifat Gbadegesin February 10, 2018 at 8:20 pm - Reply

    This will steal any heart

  228. Felix February 10, 2018 at 8:21 pm - Reply

    This is heavenly

  229. Chisom February 10, 2018 at 8:22 pm - Reply

    Wow! Abefe the grande master of the Queen’s heart

  230. Folly February 10, 2018 at 8:22 pm - Reply

    Good

  231. Sapphire February 10, 2018 at 8:23 pm - Reply

    This is a gem of a poem

  232. Oluwadamilola February 10, 2018 at 8:24 pm - Reply

    Now I believe in love

  233. Keji Spicy February 10, 2018 at 8:25 pm - Reply

    I love this so so much

  234. Bookworm February 10, 2018 at 8:26 pm - Reply

    Please publish this. The world needs to see it

  235. Fisayo February 10, 2018 at 8:26 pm - Reply

    Love is a beautiful thing.

  236. Victoria Olu February 10, 2018 at 8:27 pm - Reply

    This is a bomb

  237. Titilope Queenie February 10, 2018 at 8:28 pm - Reply

    Amazing poem

  238. Segun Richard February 10, 2018 at 8:29 pm - Reply

    Rich figurative expressions. This is cool

  239. Chinyere February 10, 2018 at 8:30 pm - Reply

    Thus I found poetry that made me cry without the thread of tragedy…kudos

  240. Drey February 10, 2018 at 8:31 pm - Reply

    One love blood

  241. Koko Tobi February 10, 2018 at 8:32 pm - Reply

    I salute you still you write beautiful poems with such ease

  242. Adesakin Adeola February 10, 2018 at 8:33 pm - Reply

    Hahahahaha…poets are crazy

  243. Bello BabaTee February 10, 2018 at 8:34 pm - Reply

    You are repping us well…omo ladoke

  244. olabode February 10, 2018 at 8:35 pm - Reply

    I hail ooo

  245. Ebere February 10, 2018 at 8:36 pm - Reply

    Applaudise. Valentine is early

  246. Kolapo February 10, 2018 at 8:37 pm - Reply

    Loving each line of this poem

  247. Olayimika February 10, 2018 at 8:38 pm - Reply

    How did you get so good bro?.
    This is just perfect

  248. Jane February 10, 2018 at 9:13 pm - Reply

    Great one bard

  249. Chinasie February 10, 2018 at 9:19 pm - Reply

    I am lost for words

  250. Jannie February 10, 2018 at 9:22 pm - Reply

    You depicted the poetry with such skills that it almost looked real

  251. Precious February 10, 2018 at 9:24 pm - Reply

    Precious like my name.

  252. Chisom February 10, 2018 at 9:25 pm - Reply

    This is magical.

  253. Hardol February 10, 2018 at 9:27 pm - Reply

    See imagery. The regal robe if God and play in heaven

  254. Corper Ebuwa February 10, 2018 at 9:28 pm - Reply

    Magnificent

  255. Xters February 10, 2018 at 9:30 pm - Reply

    Well blended words

  256. Marvis February 10, 2018 at 9:32 pm - Reply

    Solid, sweet and relatable

  257. Young Onyeoma February 10, 2018 at 9:33 pm - Reply

    Words painted with precision .

  258. Esther February 10, 2018 at 9:35 pm - Reply

    This piece is beautiful

  259. Baby Presh February 10, 2018 at 9:35 pm - Reply

    This na the real thing. I vote my man Taiwo

  260. Dammy Adams February 10, 2018 at 9:40 pm - Reply

    Simple diction, clearn expression. This is a crowd pleaser.
    Dammy adams

  261. Onye February 10, 2018 at 9:42 pm - Reply

    I got drown in the sea of love

  262. Praiseworthy February 10, 2018 at 9:42 pm - Reply

    You must win Taiwo

  263. Komolafe Wisdomite February 10, 2018 at 9:44 pm - Reply

    This is an erudite piece

  264. Najite Oteri February 10, 2018 at 9:53 pm - Reply

    Muah muah….kisses to the writer of this. I don’t know you but this is good stuff

  265. Princess Ugoji February 10, 2018 at 9:55 pm - Reply

    ÀBÈFÉ

  266. Precious February 10, 2018 at 9:58 pm - Reply

    Abefe must be precious

  267. Oluwanifemi February 10, 2018 at 10:00 pm - Reply

    The interplay of words is master class

  268. Ibidunni February 10, 2018 at 10:03 pm - Reply

    Cheers to dopeness

  269. Dammy February 10, 2018 at 10:09 pm - Reply

    Abefe!!!

  270. Irene February 10, 2018 at 10:10 pm - Reply

    When love is the order of the day, words like these are bound to spill. Keep inking poet

  271. Akintola February 10, 2018 at 10:13 pm - Reply

    This guy you be player o.
    See fine poem

  272. Shina Moses February 10, 2018 at 10:19 pm - Reply

    This looks like Psalms…nice verses

  273. Adesua February 10, 2018 at 10:21 pm - Reply

    Amazing

  274. Mariam February 10, 2018 at 10:22 pm - Reply

    Romantic, dreamy. Clapping for you

  275. Favour February 10, 2018 at 10:25 pm - Reply

    This is my favorite love poem ever

  276. Johnson Oliver February 10, 2018 at 10:29 pm - Reply

    You are talented sir. Keep writing

  277. Oyindamola February 10, 2018 at 10:31 pm - Reply

    My friend

  278. Hawkins February 10, 2018 at 10:34 pm - Reply

    Not much of a poetry fan but this one is nice.

  279. Tunmininu February 10, 2018 at 10:35 pm - Reply

    Okay

  280. Ojo Opeyemi February 10, 2018 at 10:39 pm - Reply

    One word, GRAND

  281. Edun February 10, 2018 at 10:40 pm - Reply

    Twins, you did good

  282. George Gladys February 10, 2018 at 10:43 pm - Reply

    I hate long stuffs, I read this top to bottom twice

  283. Sharon okotie February 10, 2018 at 10:45 pm - Reply

    Luvly…

  284. Craig February 10, 2018 at 10:45 pm - Reply

    The graduation of this piece is well planned and executed by a poet I respect so much

  285. Adeniran Olubumi February 10, 2018 at 10:47 pm - Reply

    You rose to thus occasion

  286. Femi February 10, 2018 at 10:47 pm - Reply

    Great write up

  287. Smart February 10, 2018 at 10:48 pm - Reply

    You rose to thus occasion

  288. Comrade imah February 10, 2018 at 10:50 pm - Reply

    This is endearing bro

  289. Ajibila February 10, 2018 at 10:53 pm - Reply

    Love

  290. Yosimi February 11, 2018 at 12:26 am - Reply

    Awe-mazing! This is a joy to read.

  291. Sandra February 11, 2018 at 12:31 am - Reply

    Mind blowing versification.

  292. Kingsley February 11, 2018 at 12:34 am - Reply

    Lovely poem, Bro.
    This is a great work, Kudos.

  293. Rotimi February 11, 2018 at 12:36 am - Reply

    Divinely inspiring.

  294. Bode February 11, 2018 at 12:38 am - Reply

    Plausible piece. Bless you, Bro.

  295. Aremu February 11, 2018 at 12:39 am - Reply

    Aesthetics well versed.
    You penned this for me.

  296. Prince February 11, 2018 at 12:41 am - Reply

    Boss! It is your thing, claim it.

  297. Johnson February 11, 2018 at 12:42 am - Reply

    Best poem I’ve ever read this year.

  298. Dolapo February 11, 2018 at 12:44 am - Reply

    Let this forever be. Magnificent.

  299. Mayowa February 11, 2018 at 12:46 am - Reply

    This is a product of erudition.
    Keep it up, Sir.

  300. Jullyplume February 11, 2018 at 12:47 am - Reply

    You got me blushing baby. I know you wrote this for me.

  301. Debby February 11, 2018 at 12:48 am - Reply

    Creatively penned.

  302. KingFlo February 11, 2018 at 12:49 am - Reply

    I envy this masterpiece.

  303. Queen February 11, 2018 at 12:50 am - Reply

    This is royal, dear. Ink on.

  304. Dikson February 11, 2018 at 12:52 am - Reply

    Wonderful

  305. Arewa February 11, 2018 at 12:53 am - Reply

    Beauti-ficient. Cool one.

  306. Arewa February 11, 2018 at 12:55 am - Reply

    Beauti-ficient. Cool one.

  307. Tosine February 11, 2018 at 12:56 am - Reply

    Great write.

  308. Abigirl February 11, 2018 at 12:58 am - Reply

    This is highly inspiring.

  309. Niyideen February 11, 2018 at 12:59 am - Reply

    I am speechless but this is awestrucking.

  310. Oyin February 11, 2018 at 1:00 am - Reply

    Thanks for this write up, Katoonspeaks.
    I can very well relate.

  311. Angel February 11, 2018 at 1:02 am - Reply

    This is beyond ordinary sense and imagination.

  312. Seun February 11, 2018 at 1:07 am - Reply

    Dope one, Boss.
    I love it.❤

  313. Melody February 11, 2018 at 1:08 am - Reply

    Melodious. Rhythmical. Amazing.

  314. Jenifer February 11, 2018 at 1:09 am - Reply

    Abefe is a great poem with skill and creativity woven to capture the poet’s persona.

  315. Blessing February 11, 2018 at 1:10 am - Reply

    War sentiments. Greatly written.

  316. Ballo February 11, 2018 at 1:12 am - Reply

    I await a masculine version of this.
    This one na gbemu oo.
    Kudos.

  317. Mike February 11, 2018 at 1:14 am - Reply

    This is what o call poetry.

  318. Daeze February 11, 2018 at 1:16 am - Reply

    I only wished this was written for or by me.

  319. Dada February 11, 2018 at 1:17 am - Reply

    Scintillating.

  320. Diamond February 11, 2018 at 1:17 am - Reply

    This is a gem.

  321. Tola February 11, 2018 at 1:18 am - Reply

    This is power.

  322. Tom February 11, 2018 at 1:19 am - Reply

    I cherish this.

  323. Grace February 11, 2018 at 1:20 am - Reply

    Where has this talent been?
    Please, write more.

  324. Dorc February 11, 2018 at 1:21 am - Reply

    I am spellbound with this.

  325. Leke February 11, 2018 at 1:22 am - Reply

    Throw ’em cups up. You own this.

  326. Tundey February 11, 2018 at 1:23 am - Reply

    Pen is mightier than sword.

  327. Enimola February 11, 2018 at 1:24 am - Reply

    This poem has emotion, power and sensation. Kudos.

  328. Vic February 11, 2018 at 1:26 am - Reply

    Fiery. This is hot.

  329. Gbemi February 11, 2018 at 1:27 am - Reply

    Elating piece.

  330. Jude February 11, 2018 at 1:28 am - Reply

    Artistic. Aesthetic.

  331. Sonya February 11, 2018 at 1:29 am - Reply

    Beautiful.

  332. Wonder February 11, 2018 at 1:30 am - Reply

    This is full of wonder.

  333. Wonder February 11, 2018 at 1:32 am - Reply

    Skillful and creatively written.

  334. One Micaiah February 11, 2018 at 1:48 am - Reply

    Great piece, always and forever bro.

  335. Tola Marvel February 11, 2018 at 1:51 am - Reply

    Sometimes I wish I can write so lovely. I love this.

  336. P Klassique February 11, 2018 at 1:54 am - Reply

    Too sweet a piece. Lovely.

  337. Emmanuella February 11, 2018 at 1:56 am - Reply

    Awwwn. So cute.

  338. D February 11, 2018 at 1:59 am - Reply

    Just don’t stop writing bro. Good something.

  339. Alabi Olushola February 11, 2018 at 2:02 am - Reply

    Glory!!!

  340. Folashade February 11, 2018 at 2:04 am - Reply

    Speechless.

  341. Eberechukwu February 11, 2018 at 2:11 am - Reply

    Hmm. Bae must see this.

  342. Ehiz February 11, 2018 at 2:13 am - Reply

    Wonderful one bro.

  343. Helen February 11, 2018 at 2:14 am - Reply

    I’m in love with this one. Nice write-up.

  344. Bukola Baby February 11, 2018 at 2:16 am - Reply

    Wow. I’m just speechless abeg.

  345. Estelle LaBelle February 11, 2018 at 2:18 am - Reply

    Such beauty. 😘

  346. Innocent February 11, 2018 at 2:20 am - Reply

    Great one bro.

  347. Martins February 11, 2018 at 2:22 am - Reply

    Pheeew. Never seen something this good in a while sha

  348. Abolarinwa February 11, 2018 at 2:24 am - Reply

    Kudos to you bro. Don’t stop writing man.

  349. O. D. February 11, 2018 at 2:25 am - Reply

    Cute.

  350. Det. February 11, 2018 at 2:27 am - Reply

    Nice one bro.

  351. Patty February 11, 2018 at 2:29 am - Reply

    This is too good.

  352. Adeshina Michael February 11, 2018 at 2:30 am - Reply

    Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful

  353. Pure Peters February 11, 2018 at 2:32 am - Reply

    Pure poetry. I love it.

  354. Adesola Ayoade February 11, 2018 at 2:33 am - Reply

    Good one mehn

  355. Jephthah February 11, 2018 at 2:35 am - Reply

    It’s a wonderful poem with a lovely message in it. Nice.

  356. Bunmi February 11, 2018 at 2:37 am - Reply

    Dude, this is too cute jare.

  357. Aderonke Ojerinde February 11, 2018 at 2:38 am - Reply

    I love you.

  358. Nkechi February 11, 2018 at 2:39 am - Reply

    Oh my. What can I say now? Wo, your head is there gan.

  359. Harry Potter February 11, 2018 at 2:41 am - Reply

    It’s really hard for me to appreciate things like this, but I just gotta give it to you bro. You’re too good.

  360. Lilian February 11, 2018 at 6:03 am - Reply

    Vote this

  361. Aderonke Adeniran February 11, 2018 at 6:05 am - Reply

    @Oladele TAIWO Oluwaseyi nice

  362. Abraham February 11, 2018 at 6:07 am - Reply

    I vote this one

  363. Ugo February 11, 2018 at 6:09 am - Reply

    Taiwo’s poem

  364. Davies February 11, 2018 at 6:10 am - Reply

    Poem 3 entry 7

  365. Oliver Johnson February 11, 2018 at 6:11 am - Reply

    Wow

  366. Nosa February 11, 2018 at 6:18 am - Reply

    Fine words

  367. Jolly fissy February 11, 2018 at 6:21 am - Reply

    I am still blushing from the words of this poem

  368. Blessing M. February 11, 2018 at 6:22 am - Reply

    Subtle

  369. Sammie February 11, 2018 at 6:23 am - Reply

    You are a bundle of wonders. You never cease to amaze me

  370. Kaka James February 11, 2018 at 6:26 am - Reply

    I vote for this

  371. Obi ozone February 11, 2018 at 6:28 am - Reply

    Wordplay, imagery, figures of speech. This is a mine. Write one for me

  372. Anointed Femi February 11, 2018 at 6:28 am - Reply

    May God continue to bless your brain

  373. Mukaila Ekwe February 11, 2018 at 6:34 am - Reply

    I like it

  374. Chidozie February 11, 2018 at 6:35 am - Reply

    I salute you

  375. Kemona February 11, 2018 at 6:36 am - Reply

    Awe-mazing, Awe-some

  376. Temidayo February 11, 2018 at 6:38 am - Reply

    Nice verses, especially stanza 2

  377. Adesoji Ruth February 11, 2018 at 6:39 am - Reply

    Lol

  378. Ayomide February 11, 2018 at 6:40 am - Reply

    This has got me. So hot

  379. Kemisola February 11, 2018 at 6:41 am - Reply

    Hmmmm

  380. Funmibi Olaleye February 11, 2018 at 6:43 am - Reply

    What more can I say? This poem is the bomb

  381. cyegware February 11, 2018 at 6:44 am - Reply

    If I was a girl right now, I’d snatch you from your girlfriend. Deep musing

  382. Ayo Abigail February 11, 2018 at 6:46 am - Reply

    You are an heart robber

  383. Ayo Abigail February 11, 2018 at 6:47 am - Reply

    Did you write this? Wow so cool

  384. Kaka Abdulahi February 11, 2018 at 6:49 am - Reply

    Merci

  385. Glossy makeover February 11, 2018 at 6:50 am - Reply

    This is beautiful

  386. Horlarmy February 11, 2018 at 6:53 am - Reply

    Oladele you are one special writer. The sky is your stepping stone

  387. Jumoke February 11, 2018 at 6:54 am - Reply

    This is beyond good. I will show my friends.

  388. Solid rock February 11, 2018 at 6:57 am - Reply

    The poem is deep sha

  389. Sarah February 11, 2018 at 7:00 am - Reply

    Good work

  390. Jummie February 11, 2018 at 7:01 am - Reply

    You can use steemit for your work bro. This is hot

  391. Nedu February 11, 2018 at 7:02 am - Reply

    I read this and I like it.

  392. Denike abosede February 11, 2018 at 7:04 am - Reply

    I comment @Oladele TAIWO Oluwaseyi

  393. Martha February 11, 2018 at 7:06 am - Reply

    This is the kind of love we all want. Sweet fantasies

  394. Oluwahenry February 11, 2018 at 7:07 am - Reply

    This poet has a beautiful pen

  395. Israel February 11, 2018 at 7:08 am - Reply

    You poem is good

  396. Omolade February 11, 2018 at 7:09 am - Reply

    Cool

  397. Charismatic Tolu February 11, 2018 at 7:10 am - Reply

    Nice one. Really nice

  398. Jerry Idoga February 11, 2018 at 7:12 am - Reply

    Powerful

  399. Mr machine February 11, 2018 at 7:13 am - Reply

    The mechanics deployed in this poem is scintillating. Altogether it is a joy to read and easy to understand. Good flow, nice rhythm and blessed imagery. Kudos

  400. Mary Kent February 11, 2018 at 7:15 am - Reply

    From the very confusing poems, this poem stands apart. It is relatable, deep and beautiful

  401. Bambam horla February 11, 2018 at 7:16 am - Reply

    Eleyi gidi gan o. Original masterpiece

  402. Chike February 11, 2018 at 7:17 am - Reply

    Nicely written

  403. Amusu February 11, 2018 at 7:18 am - Reply

    I see who this is about. Lovely

  404. Onaolapo Isaac February 11, 2018 at 7:20 am - Reply

    Wow.
    Do you write songs too. I’d like to meet you

  405. Oga writer February 11, 2018 at 7:22 am - Reply

    You have employed nothing but class in this piece. I could envision you writing it. Enjoyable

  406. Seun Favor February 11, 2018 at 7:23 am - Reply

    Your diction is powerful

  407. Kayode February 11, 2018 at 7:24 am - Reply

    Cool piece

  408. JO February 11, 2018 at 7:25 am - Reply

    I need to start writing again…cute piece

  409. Dammy February 11, 2018 at 12:48 pm - Reply

    Awesome, more wisdom

  410. jeka uma February 11, 2018 at 4:10 pm - Reply

    Glorious write up

  411. Abeni February 11, 2018 at 4:11 pm - Reply

    blessings brother mi

  412. Bakare Olufemi February 11, 2018 at 4:13 pm - Reply

    This is a winner, bakare said so

  413. Lilian February 11, 2018 at 4:16 pm - Reply

    voted

  414. Lilian February 11, 2018 at 4:17 pm - Reply

    nicely done

  415. Dammie February 11, 2018 at 4:55 pm - Reply

    Nice

  416. Opeyemi February 11, 2018 at 4:56 pm - Reply

    Good piece

  417. Nifemi February 11, 2018 at 5:01 pm - Reply

    Boom

  418. Ibidun February 11, 2018 at 5:03 pm - Reply

    This poem is good

  419. Favour February 11, 2018 at 5:09 pm - Reply

    I’m glad you penned this

  420. Johnson February 11, 2018 at 5:13 pm - Reply

    This will be my favourite love poem of all time

  421. Ojo February 11, 2018 at 5:18 pm - Reply

    Love glittering like stars

  422. Hawkins February 11, 2018 at 5:20 pm - Reply

    Dopest love poem ever

  423. Oyin February 11, 2018 at 5:23 pm - Reply

    This poem is sweet

  424. Taiwo muritala Adekunle February 11, 2018 at 8:08 pm - Reply

    keep it up bro
    nice piece

  425. Opeyemi February 11, 2018 at 8:21 pm - Reply

    Nice 1 bro….it’s indeed mind captivating

  426. Oluwakemi February 11, 2018 at 8:50 pm - Reply

    More of God’s wisdom, keep it up

  427. Ogunbode Oluwakemi Elizabeth February 11, 2018 at 8:51 pm - Reply

    More of God’s wisdom, keep it up

  428. kamal balo February 11, 2018 at 11:32 pm - Reply

    Excellent keep it up

  429. Sharon O February 12, 2018 at 12:02 am - Reply

    A very wonderful piece well written.. There’s beauty in this poem hey.. *thumbs*

  430. Femo February 12, 2018 at 12:12 am - Reply

    I love this poem boss.. Pen on well

  431. Dasper Dee February 12, 2018 at 12:14 am - Reply

    Well written sir Katoonspeaks.. Lovely and wonderful finger twist

  432. Uche February 12, 2018 at 12:15 am - Reply

    Superb one uncle.. I’m proud to have you as a friend

  433. Ykay best February 12, 2018 at 12:17 am - Reply

    This is from a blessed hand.. Very smooth and sensational
    The arrangement was fab.
    Very nice one fam..

  434. Jo anna February 12, 2018 at 12:19 am - Reply

    Very lovely dear.. You are still this good

  435. Lauretta February 12, 2018 at 12:21 am - Reply

    Wonderful sire.. You keep challenging my ink to continue overflowing..
    I derive sense from this piece you’ve penned.. weldone sir

  436. Emian shades February 12, 2018 at 12:24 am - Reply

    Here’s my heart with crimson tears dripping.. I love that line. Dope one bro

  437. Mr. Leonard February 12, 2018 at 12:34 am - Reply

    I’m always inspired by every of write up boss.. Abefe is a love one coming from a big boss..

  438. Faith February 12, 2018 at 12:35 am - Reply

    Lovely sire

  439. Um_titi February 12, 2018 at 12:36 am - Reply

    Wonderful

  440. Omo Akin February 12, 2018 at 12:38 am - Reply

    Lovely one.. À-bè-fé

  441. Solar S February 12, 2018 at 12:39 am - Reply

    I’m amazed by the imagery painting.. Every line well weaved
    Abefe is a nice poem

  442. One Micaiah February 12, 2018 at 12:41 am - Reply

    Wonderfully weaved.. I keep reading over and over again.

  443. Sunkanmi February 12, 2018 at 12:42 am - Reply

    My say is that I love this piece.. Even though I’m not really a good poet
    I look forward to writing like this someday

  444. Anonymous February 12, 2018 at 12:43 am - Reply

    Abefe.. My love for this piece
    It has always been like that bro
    You carry people along

  445. Omotoke Debby February 12, 2018 at 12:45 am - Reply

    I look forward to reading more from you boss

  446. Christy February 12, 2018 at 12:46 am - Reply

    I hail thee boss

  447. Christy February 12, 2018 at 12:47 am - Reply

    “In my dying days….” that line I could relate well

  448. Bukky February 12, 2018 at 12:49 am - Reply

    in the hood of my child days, I left a rush
    I’m trying to dig that

    It’s lovely sire

  449. Roseline February 12, 2018 at 12:49 am - Reply

    Nice one boyfriend mi..

  450. Joshua February 12, 2018 at 12:51 am - Reply

    Weldone bro.. I’ll do well to read this piece later

  451. Flave master February 12, 2018 at 12:52 am - Reply

    I might be a good poet buh I could relate well with Abefe
    It’s quite interesting boss

  452. Dr. Victor February 12, 2018 at 12:53 am - Reply

    I see what others ain’t seeing I guess.. Lol

    Love

  453. General Akan February 12, 2018 at 12:55 am - Reply

    Terms well designed.. Nice Yoruba weaving sage

  454. Monsur February 12, 2018 at 12:56 am - Reply

    I love to read from you.. Yet another lovely piece bro
    Permission to copy sire

  455. Dekunle Golden February 12, 2018 at 12:58 am - Reply

    Everyone is golden.. Every hyperbole made it sound heavy to the mind..
    This is a poem for greater poets
    Very lovely

  456. Sammy February 12, 2018 at 1:00 am - Reply

    Sammy says it’s a nice piece.. My girlfriend read it too and appreciate the ink on the paper
    Nice one bro.. #exceptional

  457. Teejay February 12, 2018 at 1:02 am - Reply

    Abefe.. Yet another beautiful weaving from a boss.. Yoruba flexing lol

  458. Miss Bee February 12, 2018 at 1:04 am - Reply

    love glittering like stars.. Nice similitude sage

  459. Fassy master February 12, 2018 at 1:06 am - Reply

    This is creative and creative thinking did it.. Bro well done

  460. Oluwabunmi February 12, 2018 at 1:07 am - Reply

    Love your powerful diction…

  461. Omo ibo February 12, 2018 at 1:09 am - Reply

    My dad love the write.. And I could relate a bit coz I’m not that good a poet

  462. Omo ibo February 12, 2018 at 1:10 am - Reply

    Boluwade says this is very sweet taste experience of the piece..

  463. Olatunji Ebunoluwa February 12, 2018 at 1:16 am - Reply

    I can’t really say much about poems but with what I’m seeing.. Dictions, imagery, FOS
    This is great a writing..

  464. Okechuckwu February 12, 2018 at 1:18 am - Reply

    Sir Katoonspeaks can’t stop to amaze me.. You’re boss and laying good examples.. Abefe another one from a superb writer
    I appreciate you

  465. Tex February 12, 2018 at 1:20 am - Reply

    Very confirm.. Painted with imagery, the weave of words partly Yoruba keep giving this internal kick

  466. Mayroh February 12, 2018 at 1:22 am - Reply

    I’d love to read more from you sir

  467. Ayaba Esteri February 12, 2018 at 1:24 am - Reply

    I bow at the feet of this Abefe
    Another wonderful one from a sage

  468. Olayinks February 12, 2018 at 1:25 am - Reply

    Yinkus is proud of you boy.. Lol

  469. Shewa February 12, 2018 at 1:28 am - Reply

    Katoonspeaks mi.. You’re winning this
    Sorry I had network issues thats why I’m seeing this late..

  470. Shewa February 12, 2018 at 1:29 am - Reply

    Abefe…
    I have weeped my tears, I have….. sad words
    A nice way to start a poem and create peoples interest.
    Very exceptional and scintillating

  471. Ceekay February 12, 2018 at 1:31 am - Reply

    Let’s get to know each other brother.. I have some stuffs would like to share
    And nice poem

  472. Akudo Jane February 12, 2018 at 9:23 am - Reply

    You did yourself good

  473. Ilesanmk February 12, 2018 at 9:25 am - Reply

    You are good bro…this poem is lit, literally

  474. Sussy February 12, 2018 at 9:26 am - Reply

    Super

  475. Lizzy beloved February 12, 2018 at 9:28 am - Reply

    Beloved, this is lovely

  476. Adeniji Funsho February 12, 2018 at 9:30 am - Reply

    Fresh, dope

  477. Chisom ngoka February 12, 2018 at 9:31 am - Reply

    Wow

  478. Funky Olufunke February 12, 2018 at 9:33 am - Reply

    Higher and higher bro

  479. Becky February 12, 2018 at 9:34 am - Reply

    This is wawuu

  480. Anike Ogo February 12, 2018 at 9:37 am - Reply

    Good comment

  481. Lalaye Damilola February 12, 2018 at 9:52 am - Reply

    Awesome

  482. Victor February 12, 2018 at 9:54 am - Reply

    Sharp piece. Well written

  483. Yemi February 12, 2018 at 9:55 am - Reply

    Very cute

  484. Bisi Betty February 12, 2018 at 9:57 am - Reply

    Beautiful

  485. Olusho Deborad February 12, 2018 at 9:59 am - Reply

    Good one

  486. precious February 12, 2018 at 10:05 am - Reply

    nice one

  487. Ifeoluwa February 12, 2018 at 10:05 am - Reply

    This is a great work keep it up

  488. precious February 12, 2018 at 10:21 am - Reply

    nice one

  489. Wande February 12, 2018 at 12:26 pm - Reply

    Wonderful

  490. Chidi February 12, 2018 at 2:58 pm - Reply

    Brother man, wataguan

  491. Chuck Scott February 12, 2018 at 3:00 pm - Reply

    A writer of your calibre is rare. You write with such ease and you bring beauty to the fore

  492. Titi Odugbe February 12, 2018 at 3:02 pm - Reply

    Cool poem

  493. Juan February 12, 2018 at 3:03 pm - Reply

    Great poem

  494. Omoboye Fola February 12, 2018 at 3:05 pm - Reply

    This is out of this world

  495. Peter Pelumi February 12, 2018 at 3:06 pm - Reply

    I saw this in a group and decided to open it. Turns out it is the bomb

  496. Immaculate February 12, 2018 at 3:07 pm - Reply

    Deep content, artistic

  497. Molade T. February 12, 2018 at 3:09 pm - Reply

    I vote for Abefe. It is a good poem

  498. Emmanuel February 12, 2018 at 3:10 pm - Reply

    Good language

  499. Georgina February 12, 2018 at 3:11 pm - Reply

    Beautiful

  500. Dee1 February 12, 2018 at 3:13 pm - Reply

    Good piece. Very neat

  501. Adebukola February 12, 2018 at 3:14 pm - Reply

    Voted @oladeleTaiwo abefe

  502. Vicky Ajayi February 12, 2018 at 3:15 pm - Reply

    I love it. It resonates my thinking with great imagination

  503. Joshua February 12, 2018 at 3:17 pm - Reply

    Good piece my friend

  504. Ademola February 12, 2018 at 3:20 pm - Reply

    This is professional boss

  505. Cynthia.A February 12, 2018 at 3:22 pm - Reply

    Good poem

  506. Daniels February 12, 2018 at 3:24 pm - Reply

    Nice one @katoonspeaks

  507. Tess February 12, 2018 at 3:25 pm - Reply

    Good poem

  508. Ope February 12, 2018 at 3:27 pm - Reply

    This writer is good

  509. Remmy February 12, 2018 at 3:29 pm - Reply

    Sleek. On point baba

  510. Will February 12, 2018 at 3:32 pm - Reply

    TAIWO, this is Will. My friends are saying the voting is not coming through. Saying moderation something. I hope this get through. Good stuff

  511. Dolly pee February 12, 2018 at 3:34 pm - Reply

    You must win . your work is cook

  512. Dolly pee February 12, 2018 at 3:34 pm - Reply

    You must win . your work is cook

  513. Blessing Wunmi February 12, 2018 at 3:38 pm - Reply

    Dope

  514. Arise and shine February 12, 2018 at 3:40 pm - Reply

    You are a star. Keep shinning

  515. Gracious Jenny February 12, 2018 at 3:41 pm - Reply

    I like the way you express yourself. The piece is warm

  516. Gracious Jenny February 12, 2018 at 3:42 pm - Reply

    Blue. This poem is just 50 shades of good

  517. Toba February 12, 2018 at 3:44 pm - Reply

    You are a god of words

  518. Praiz February 12, 2018 at 3:45 pm - Reply

    I love you poet. You have my vote

  519. Amao February 12, 2018 at 3:46 pm - Reply

    Astoundingly good

  520. Wemimo Akande February 12, 2018 at 3:47 pm - Reply

    I don’t know much about poetry but this poem is so good. I give it 100 percent

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